Why a Great First Line Hooks Readers (and How to Write One)

I have a weakness for a killer first line. If there’s one thing that pulls me into a story instantly, it’s an opening sentence with serious oomph—the kind that makes you sit up and say, I have to keep reading!

A strong opening isn’t just a nice touch—it’s essential. It’s the first handshake between writer and reader, setting the stage for everything that follows.

Some of my all-time favorites include:

“You see, I had this space suit.” — Have Space Suit—Will Travel by Robert A. Heinlein

“Marley was dead: to begin with.” — A Christmas Carol by Charles Dickens

“O for a Muse of fire, that would ascend The brightest heaven of invention…” — Henry V by William Shakespeare

These opening lines are memorable because they immediately establish intrigue, tone, or a sense of curiosity. They invite the reader into the world of the story with just a few carefully chosen words.

That’s the kind of impact I strive for in my own first lines—ones that whisper (or shout), Come closer. There’s more to this story. It’s a moment of connection, where a single sentence can captivate, intrigue, or even challenge expectations.

Here are a few of mine:

“On her sister’s wedding day, Ari noticed that one of her ears had migrated to her hand.” from the short story “Playing It By Ear”

“On the Christmas card, two fluffy Persian cats sporting felt antlers stared at Ethan in disgust.” from A Hundred Promises of Love

“On the outside, it masqueraded as a run-down, dirty warehouse, but the Klockwerk Kraken had a reputation for being the closest and most unique bar at the Switchpoint Station port.” from The Klockwerk Kraken

Why Your First Line Matters

A strong first line sets the tone for the entire story. It can be whimsical, eerie, nostalgic, or even drop a hint that something monstrous lurks just around the corner.

It’s your first opportunity to spark curiosity and establish the atmosphere. It also provides a crucial first impression of the main character, setting, or narrative style. A well-crafted opening line isn’t just a hook—it’s a promise of the adventure to come.

Your opening sentence is your reader’s first introduction to you—the writer. It’s your chance to say:

“Come on! We’re going on an adventure.”

And if done right, your readers won’t just accept the invitation—they’ll race ahead, eager to see what happens next.

Think about your favorite books—what do their first lines have in common? How do they pull you in? Do you prefer a bold statement, a thought-provoking mystery, or a hint of humor? Do you find yourself remembering certain first lines long after finishing the book?

I’d love to hear your thoughts! Share your favorite first lines in the comments, whether they’re from books you love or ones you’ve written yourself. What’s the best first line you’ve ever read—or written? Let’s celebrate the magic of a great opening together!