Unexpected Plot Points

I’m deep in the editing on Night Market and was surprised to find
that one scene had to be totally rewritten.  I was trying to explain to
my DH (dear husband) why I needed to rewrite it and included what I
thought were incredibly logical arguments, for example, it didn’t
illustrate the main theme of the novella, it didn’t have good character
development on the supporting characters, etc.  Of course he cut right
to the chase – so you just don’t like it, right?

And he’s right.  I just don’t like it.  Ah well, back to the drawing board….

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